There was a lot of detail on casino machines and rules and regulations of the Gaming Board. A bit too much I think and I felt overwhelmed by it. I think the story would have be fine without all those details. The actual story was okay. Nick was totally in the right for being pissy when Brandon would flirt right in front of him. That was completely rude! I felt I was missing part of Brandon's story. The jumps in the storyline kept confusing me because they weren't clear right away. The author would be in the present, then jump forward missing a key part of the story, then back tell it. Like when Nick fell out of the hearse. Suddenly we were jumped to the house where he's home recovering. Then the author goes back to tell what happened after Brandon ran out of the station and at the hospital, jumping back to the present and the house once we were caught up. And this happened several times throughout the story. It was a bit frustrating. Overall, it was enjoyable, just long winded on the game machine regulations.
